Love is a wish Truth gone all wrong. Love is the hope In a sad, sad song. But we all know A fact that won’t change Love hurts us More than anything. Love kills the innocent. It murders the careless. It destroys the sun, As through the window it shines. Love is a puzzle. The pieces won’t fit. The only way you know that its true Is if it kills! So love and be loved. Hurt and be hurt. But know in the end It will kill and be killed. |
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Yes... this is how you make me feel...
I wrote another poem with the same theme, but I think this might be the better one to submit for now... |
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It's Like Going To The Zoo, Only To Find All The Animals Are Dead.
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Don't Be Fooled. Dont Get Lied To. Love Was Always Cruel...
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It's Like Going To The Zoo, Only To Find All The Animals Are Dead.
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Don't Be Fooled. Dont Get Lied To. Love Was Always Cruel...
The rhythm is really steady and it helps it along. I'd have preferred it if you had kept the rhyme scheme the same as the first stanza with 'wrong/song'. But, it is still your poem and the decisions you have made are yours. Still it is a very good poem and I love it.
'It will kill and be killed' - kinda reminds me of the meaning behind my story Who Needs It? wouldn't you say?
Still, very good poem, keep up the good work
Timmy
- Over and out -
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"Only the weakling talks of life's unfairness, or claims he is jinxed with bad luck. The strong man shrugs his shoulders and walks on."
Thanks again!
Christine
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But if crying doesn't help and you can't compose yourself, It is best to compose a poem, an honest verse of longing or simple song of hope. That is why I'm writing...
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But if crying doesn't help and you can't compose yourself, It is best to compose a poem, an honest verse of longing or simple song of hope. That is why I'm writing...
Still good, though.
And not a problem for the fav, I really did/do love it.
Timmy
- Over and out -
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"Only the weakling talks of life's unfairness, or claims he is jinxed with bad luck. The strong man shrugs his shoulders and walks on."
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